Gun Game.

First Draft — a tale of revenge.



First poem of a series titled, “Gun Game.” Enjoy!

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Keeping Revenge in Mind

I’m in “The Heights.”
& You’re in my sights.
Surprise! Surprise!
Eye’s on the prize.

Scope’s aligned.
Unusually refined.
Pull back, s l i d e.
Sublime, playtime.

I reload for fun.
Then, listen for a… “Thud!”
Oh! How I love —
My Pretty Little Passive Gun!

I love its sound.
It’s so profound!
I’ve bent your will!
I shoot to kill!

I write this as I flee —
Watching as your body bleeds!
I, thee only witness to our ocean
mingling with shades of burgundy.

Premeditated, before you murder me!

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Please note, each draft in my Gun Game series, was written during the early morning hours, whilst often still in my pajamas, and still not entirely awake… here this is! It happened out of nowhere, and I LOVE that about my morning writings. I am proud of my sick subconscious mind and find these to be quite interesting.

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My ideas on the complexities of our human mind’s, with an appreciation for the “darker” realities— Whilst insisting, Hope, remains unwavering in all of us.